Graceful Waters

by Jacklyn   May 8, 2006


Somewhere in the valley
beneath a surface of trees
there is a river flowing
slowly moving free

Over rocks and gravel
Dancing with my feet
sliding ever so gently
A graceful, peaceful speed

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  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    It's sooo pretty! i luv it! even though its short, its short, sweet and to the point...you get the important stuff right out there. yay jacklyn!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very nicee! i really lik it! iv got one kind of similar to that called "Drip-Drop" lol.. 5/5
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Short but wonderful write, well done, I have no critique to offer this poem! It was beautiful, I like nature poems and this one lived up to my expectations very well indeed, good write once again from you!

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