Short but wonderful write, well done, I have no critique to offer this poem! It was beautiful, I like nature poems and this one lived up to my expectations very well indeed, good write once again from you!

Very nicee! i really lik it! iv got one kind of similar to that called "Drip-Drop" lol.. 5/5
jessy

It's sooo pretty! i luv it! even though its short, its short, sweet and to the point...you get the important stuff right out there. yay jacklyn!