This is really good & I can relate to it. You did a really great job at expressing your emotions on this & I love the way you ended it with the repetition of the first stanza. Great job on this!

Really nice work! Repeating the first stanza works really well here and certainly gives the poem a great edge. The feelings expressed here come across very strongly. The use of linebreaks and enjambment all add to the power of the poem, and the result? Magnificent, 5/5 x

It's a pretty good poem, and I really like the end. Way to go!

I love the way you expressed your feelings. i know exactly how you feel, all my 'friends' are like that. awesome poem!

This was a really good poem. Though it seems you are having problems with your friends. Although I do not know your situation, I can leave you some advice.

Friends will come and go, change is inevitable. Accept it. However, don't let true friendships go, because they are hardest to find. Try.

Thanks for your comments as well, if you need any help or advice, or someone to talk to. Send me a private message ;)

This was good..
i know friends can be very complicated. :[

Awe so sad, yet so perfect! If this is true I can understand how you felt. There was a time when all my friends tuned their backs on me! I loved tis poem because sady I can relate! Awesome job and you've made my faverotes list!

Oh that was a good poem as a matter of fact I am going through the same thing right now so keep strong

Don't care about the person she doesn't deserve your friendship. but dis is mi favorite poem! :))

A very nice poem indeed. I can relate heaps aswell. I really like it tehe. And I'm so glad it actually let me log into the friendship section, Usually it doesn't no matter how many times I try. But shhh, Don't tell no one I did a friendship one =P

Very awesome poem. Keep it up 5/5

`Taleee xx

Hey... i have a friend like the one you described and i really sux! people should love their friends as much as they do themselves. thanks for an awesome poem =D