This is so eloquently put. Wonderful work!

Hey...i know how that feels...im here to talk if u want..
Jennifer

This is really ubber cool however I go all weird when I see spelling mistakes, I'm only 13 but I know I sound like a teacher soz :S Maybe is one word. But other then that I really enjoyed this poem.

This poem is very interesting, although there are some things in the poem which lower it's overal "poetic value" For instance, there are simple spelling mistakes at some points.

Interesting choice of structure, the more blocked text signifies more of one thought throughout the whole poem, much like a paragraph can only have one thought..not just a bunch of btogrbkijidfjiejf in one.

Good work, the flow gets cut off a bit though.

Thanks for commentating on my poetry and I like your poems exploring fear and the other one about love I like them keep up the good work.