A very sad, but excellent poem.. i loved it

Extremely well expressed....!!!! good work!!!

Oh lord this is so amazing
it touched my heart
and a tear came running down my cheek
this was so sad
i cant belive my eyes
10/5
i give respect to this poem im adding it to fave

OMG... THAT IS AN AMAZING BUT SAD POEM...
5/5
~SARA~

WUT IT D0 I LIKED DA P0EM U WR0TE U G0T SKILLZ LIL LADY GAVE U A 5
~RAYRAY~

Omg, that poem put me in tears.....nothing like that has ever happened......nice job 5/5

Very good poem. Heart felt. I loved it.
the first stanza grabbed me, and the last stanza refuset to let go of me. One of those poems that make you think or call your mom right away.

I can't begin to understand how my cliche/ forced rhyme poem is even competing with yours.
Again, I loved it. Hit home for Mothers Day.
Thank your for sharing it with us.

I no the feeling to that poem, my mum write a poem like that, when my big brother died before i was born, its absloutely devasting for a mom to go through that.

amy

This poem is so beautiful and so so sad....well done...

Hey sweetie! lovely job :) i don't feel like there's anything else I can add to all the beautiful comments you've already got :D except that you really have the ability to feel what another person is feeling and put it down in words. sometimes the flow of the poem stumbles but u pull it through with your wording and rhymes... *grins* fantastic hun. catch u l8er *hugs*

This really broke my heart to read, the emotions were shown all the way through.
Amazing Poem.
All my love sweetie. x

Its good

Wow. seriously. i love your poems. now im like really obbsessed with all of them . lol. this is amazing.

Wow...this is so sad, it made my eyes tear up. Awesome Job, once again. 5/5

TAKE CARE-stargazer38

Nikki! oh my gosh hun! this almost made me cry!!! i love it!!! that hits close to home. much luvs!~Kim

That poem is so sad...i wish i could write as well as you....5/5

I think this has to be my favourite poem ever. 5/5 You are fantastic.

Ya, i heard about that. very sad, i hope you werent clost to them, that is extreemly sad, and if you were i am so sorry. you must live in orem.. i live in layton..
great work tho.
5/5

5/5 could not even begin to explain,
this is wonderfully heart wrenching.