Forever Melancholy

by Kaylee   May 8, 2006


Forever melancholy sands upon which my castle builds.
Salt-water tide consumes million pieces from my world.
Harmonious music, nature’s violin, serenades sadness.
Skipping stones drown beneath ocean blue depth.
Listening while Earth continues to beat…beat…alive.
Forever melancholy sands, I think not to build my heart.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Short but it got the point across, it flowed excelently you again did a wonderful job on this piece 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I loved the last line. you are a very enthusiastic poet. and i love it!! again, great job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sugar

    Its soo sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short, But GREAT! I'm not sure why, It's just the way you describe things in your poetry. This was a top piece. I loved the 2nd line also. Keep it up 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    This is a very good pice of poetry and i think u are an awesome poet good job 5/5!

Read All Comments (12)

More Poems By Kaylee