Great job on this. It's very descriptive and the flow on it was really good. It was kind of short, but you did a great job with it & helped to make a point in such few words. Great job on this! 5/5*

Short n simple! i lik it :)
jessy

Amazing work... Your descriptions are exquisite and the words are simply beautiful. A flawless piece!

Even though it was short, I thought it was good. I really liked your use of words.
Listening while Earth continues to beat…beat…alive.
Forever melancholy sands, I think not to build my heart.
Those were my favorite lines. Great job! 5/5

This poem leaves a really good visual. I like the images you create.

This is absolutly beautiful :]
i love ittttttttt

Really elegant piece. I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I'll definately be adding you to my favourites! Keep writing! The use of rhyme gave the poem a really nice flow. 5/5 x

This is a very good pice of poetry and i think u are an awesome poet good job 5/5!

Short, But GREAT! I'm not sure why, It's just the way you describe things in your poetry. This was a top piece. I loved the 2nd line also. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Its soo sweet

I loved the last line. you are a very enthusiastic poet. and i love it!! again, great job. 5/5

Short but it got the point across, it flowed excelently you again did a wonderful job on this piece 5/5

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