Damn... A deep and pwoerful message. Let's hope that we never stop trying.

I thought it was a great representation of the world through a childs eyes. i especially like the way this child seemed so innocent and pure. this feeling was enhanced by the fact he was speaking to his mother. the child, although seems innocent and pure, also seems very wise to the ways of the world. a good piece of work.

Brad

Ok let me warn you this is going to be a long comment lol

"yet we turn our heads and shut our eyes"

^^^^ no way did it just cut off my comment!!! GUHHHHH! ok I will definatly e-mail it to you!

Wow.. very deep and very powerful! good message shining through there! another great write from you luanne! excellent work! 5/5

Maybe have could try instead of would try in your final sentence but other than that, this poem was so deep. A narrative that actually painted a realistic haunting picture of what it must be like to see a child's point of view on life. Your poems are usually strong so please keep writing.