Aww that is such a beautiful poem... its so sweet. Great job on this. The flow on it was really good & I loved the wording & the way that you ended it. It was very fluid & emotive.. Great job on this! 5/5**

Really sweet! Great job. Really captured the soul in this piece,
"My heart still flutters
When I see you
My eyes still sparkle
When I hear your voice
And my mouth still smiles
When you look in my direction"
Definately my favourite piece of the poem, just perfectly encaptures everthing you are trying to say here. 5/5 x

Thats a wonderful poem and also how i have felt and still do feel great job in describing these exact emotions and thanks for you comment :)

Aww...Thats so sad....Im sort of in the same position...you really inspire me with these poems..for I can realte to parts or all of most of them...

Jen

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