Love your poem... your situation is same as mine..... we just let go of our first love... kinda cruel...right?

this was a realy touching poem which everyone will like because it is you talking frankly about your emotions. It was really nice to read and, like Rauchelle said, you should never say your stuff is bad coz it may stop you wanting to write more. Eeryone's stuff gets better over practice so keep writing and well done with this, K

i really love yur poem... i can relate to it soo much