This piece is really good, the used the metaphor of being a flower very well, it is very effective. You wrote this very well with some clearly well portrayed content, it has much depth yet retains an idea of simplicity. Overall a well written peice

This poem was well written. sound like everyday life to me...with all suffering and dying. Keep up the good work!!

That was very beautiful. I love the metaphor of your life being like a rose. I wrote a similar poem but I didn't post it yet. keep writing. ~sasha~