by ASPHYXIATED May 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Your master, |
by Jenni Marie
Another good poem. 5/5 |
by Jessica
Wow! that was so dark, so poweful, so intense! excellent write! the way you used short lines really added to the dark affect of the poem and the descriptions were amazing! 5/5 |
by *Daniel94*
Holly great, they was the best lyrics, i know i love most of the music you do so have ya seen the johny cash movie walk the line, get back to me on that one at my site. cheers |
AwEsOmE!1!1 |
by Natalie
This was awesome! It all flowed really well, And the rhyme scheme was also good. An awesome job overall. I'd love to hear it to music. 5/5 |