Heaven or Hell?

by PS   May 8, 2006


Where do we belong?
in the bleached sweetness of heaven
or the dark gut wrenching pain of hell?
God? Have you foresaken us?
are we made by the almighty
or do we have the devil\'s mark.

destined to crouch in the dark,
never to feel the the sun on your arms
or the rainbows dance in the sky
never to grow old,
to feel neverending energy
an older mind in a youth\'s body
destined to feed on the
sweet infatuating nectar
of the unknowning mortal
for all of eternity.

churches do not stop us, the garlic
and the stakes rendered pointless
the sunny morning or fire can send
our souls to whatever end.

But to whom would we go
if the world finally ended
and the endless corpes on which
we feed to live each night
who will claim us.
demon or dark angel
to heaven or to burn in hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I throughly enjoyed this poem, well written and it is something that i don't find many poems about often or as well written, hence the bases of it's appeal! I like the fact it didn't rhyme all that much and it felt very much like a thought that many can relate to, and it flowed wonderfully. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is very deep and dark. It really kept my attention. The rhythm and flow of it was really good and really kept my attention. You did a great job on this! I loved it!