Wow that is very deep and dark. It really kept my attention. The rhythm and flow of it was really good and really kept my attention. You did a great job on this! I loved it!

I throughly enjoyed this poem, well written and it is something that i don't find many poems about often or as well written, hence the bases of it's appeal! I like the fact it didn't rhyme all that much and it felt very much like a thought that many can relate to, and it flowed wonderfully. I loved it!