I luv this poem

Ey hun!
I gotta say my honest opinion!
I think you shud post it in slang poems or sth!
the poem meant something but maybe you didn't know how to express how you felt on that time!
try to improve your writing by reading others poems! it really helps blv me...I can tell!
I was a BAD writer at the begining but now see who I am! lol
you're not a bad writer, you just need to read more poems to improve your way in writing and I swear You'll hv a gud future XD
just keep writing and blv in your talent =)
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x (always here for help)
thanx fr ur comment btw, meant alot to me!!