Enclosing Rain Cloud

Great use of the english language!!! a very calming and tranquil poem which makes me feel as if i am in the poem with you...an excellent peice...
xx

I also love rain/clouds/sky
nice pome.

The wording within this poem makes me take a deep breath in and enjoy the feeling of air filling my lungs , for some reason . The wording itself makes the poem come alive .

Maybe I am reading it wrong but to me it feels like : A beautiful day , then the clouds roll in , but after they have cleared , you look at everything around you like it has just been reborn . New and refreshing .

Gawd Simon I hope I am not seeing it the wrong way . Yet the way I see the wording in this poem just makes me feel alive!!

Pretty good. i like the descriptions and imagery. its cute almost naive. nice job

Oooooh...

I very much like.
It's so cool when a poem touches me that doesn't rhyme... I just LOVE those. You are an amazing writer, keep it up!!

Much love, 5/5
Car