Comments : Somewhere In Bewteen

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Its deep in parts. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Nicki*~

    Wow this one is kind of scary for me. It reminds me of my boyfriend who is not here anymore. I dont really know how to explain it but it does. I really like it though.
    Nichole

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Oh my god!!!!!!
    i can't believe a poem could make me cry!
    i spit up with like my 'one true love' well over a year ago, like ages an ages ago, since then i have had a string of fellas, and a real intense relationship which lasted like 6mths, and still to this day all i'd ever ever want out of life...is to be with him one more time! ( my 'one true love', that is)
    this poem reflects that so well... i love it!!!!!!

    this honestly did bring a tear to my eye!!!!!!!!!!

    well done 100/5...oops not poss. 5/5 instead!

    **smile**

    p.s this is amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey...WOW!! this is awesome....I relate to it alot...b/c this may sound REALLY REALLY weird but me and this guy have been datin over the internet for 9 months....and we've been together off and on for 3 years....sure I'v been with other guys but none match up to him....and I'd do anything for him....and I'll alwayz want him...b/c he'll alwayz have that one peice like ur poem said! KEEP WRITING!!!
    *Megan*