by Odd May 8, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I can't help I love you, I can't help I cry. Its just every night without you I just wanna die. I try to get over you but feelings are too strong, but anyone else love would just be so wrong. I just wish that you could see that all this painfulness is completely destroying me. But in spite of all these feeling, I will always love you, and I pray some day you will love me too,I'm sorry, I just can't help myself, I'm so in love with you! |
But u really should remove the excess tuff from the bottom.. its kinda plagairism.... b/c u didnt write it. |
But u really should remove the excess tuff from the bottom.. its kinda plagairism.... b/c u didnt write it. |
One Suggestion- Break up the lines into stanzas its kinda hard to read this way. |
Hey What i meant in the chat room was that u have to write alot of poems thqat arent rele crappy. lol. like to get the first poem award u have to write 30 poems with a rating of like 4.3 or higher.. your poems dont suck i really like this one. in fact i really love it. its well written(exept the weird letter things) and i love the format u used.. |