It was murder

by VYXSIN   May 9, 2006


As i sit all by myself
thoughts of you entered my Head thinking of how you would react
when my parents call saying I'm dead

I'm not all that sure
of what you would do
but i just want to say
i will always love you

just because we cant talk anymore
doesn't mean to say
that i wont be thinking of you
each and every day

so when i leave
remember your my friend forever
don't forget what they say
friends always belong together

so please dint forget me
all the tears have been cried
and read my suicide note
see how i really died

i guess it wasn't really what you thought
there was no way it was suicide
there was self harm
but it was murder it was homicide

they made it look like there was nothing wrong
that everything was alright
but there wasn't anything that was fine
i had been trying to put up a fight

they abused me and raped me
and led me to self harm
thats why theres so many scars
on my legs and my arm

they tried to get me
whenever they could
but i just wished they'd back off
like i knew they should

but oh no they wouldn't
they just had to pick on me
they hurt me so bad
and its that they couldn't see

so it wasn't really my choice
it wasn't really suicide
it was all their fault
it was murder it was homicide

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  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I liked the plot of the poem it was really dark and I will have to agree with HiddenxSoul because the flow wasn't that perfect maybe some commas, better spelling, and correction of words that were misspelled would've helped but that's just me either way I loved the poem and it's a tragedy that people do this to other people 5/5

    -Mori

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I think I liked this the very least of all the peices I have seen thus far. It seemed to have come from a person that just wanted to be the victim in everything and instead of taking resposiblities for thier actions they blamed it on others well thats what I thought Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by gone

    Omg i love your poems! like it expreses what you feel and it gets to me at the sme time lol i ni how you feel as im goin through mostly the sme fings. u jus gota member to be strong n that theres ppl hu care bou u........... such as me lol
    love ya x0x0

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    This poem is really good!!! keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome Poem. The darkness and the sadness within this poem was great. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job.

    Peace, Joe