by VYXSIN May 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As i sit all by myself |
I liked the plot of the poem it was really dark and I will have to agree with HiddenxSoul because the flow wasn't that perfect maybe some commas, better spelling, and correction of words that were misspelled would've helped but that's just me either way I loved the poem and it's a tragedy that people do this to other people 5/5 |
by Robert
I think I liked this the very least of all the peices I have seen thus far. It seemed to have come from a person that just wanted to be the victim in everything and instead of taking resposiblities for thier actions they blamed it on others well thats what I thought Plot121 |
by gone
Omg i love your poems! like it expreses what you feel and it gets to me at the sme time lol i ni how you feel as im goin through mostly the sme fings. u jus gota member to be strong n that theres ppl hu care bou u........... such as me lol |
by TeAr dROp
This poem is really good!!! keep up the good work! |
Awesome Poem. The darkness and the sadness within this poem was great. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job. |