Wow, really good poem! you took the words right out of my mouth because i'm in that EXACT situation right now... But keep up the good work!! I love it! |
by Lacy
Your poem is so true. I think alot of people feel that way about at least one person. But time goes on and you do move on but from time to time you still think of that person and sometime you still cry thinking of them. I think you captured the feeling of losing someone who meant everything to you. |
by Knoxy
Hey, thanx for commenting on my poem...it meant a lot to me...and i really like this poem of urz...i know what you mean...somethingz in life just don't make sense...but then later on they do...then you will see that everything worked out just how it was supposed to...thatz how i see it...hopefully all is well with you..take care, great write...5/5! |
by a
Thanx for commenting on my poem a sad cholo.it meant alot to me |
by Katie
I really like this, it basically explains what I'm going through. It was really written well |
Wow! yr poems bril was gna tl u wt i lvd da most bt its sooo much its real emotional n probably evry1z felt dis way 1ce upn a tym n u rote it fr us al da bes anyone cud :) wel dne gal! x |
by NaC
Omg thats a really strong poem.. like wow.. but hey.. its all good... that situation, so realistic.. omg.. |
Hey great poem,is this how you really feel? |
by Kitty
Awwwwwwwwww............. tht is so cute! love is so cute! ur poem is so cute! keep up the good work :). p.s hatte to be a bearer of bad news but one day you will preobably wake up (liek me) and realise there is no such thing as love. bt the fact u stiull blieve in livei s soo cute :) |
by Zoe
Hey that was amazing! It is exactly what i'm going thru right now! Keep up the good work!! |
I think your poems are sooooooooooo |