Passion

I saw your comment on Craigs, so thought I would look youup as well...this poem is VERY good so continue to write..I find it very difficult to pull off a poem without rhyming and you did it very well...will read more when time...Luv Michelle :)

Hi Kiki, just want to say thanx for the kind words you said about my poem, do you really think its that good? anyway enough about me. Your poem is brilliant, far better and more clear than mine. I love the line `my essense being disappeared`, so harrowing. Been on that emotional helter-skelter plenty of times. And the point you make about all these melencholy feelings giving birth to the desire and need to write. To express ourselves and be understood. And iv had many a day, staring into space feeling that my life was meaningless too. Wondering what paths i`ve stumbled down to get into this situation. I`ve put you on my favorites list and will be watching out for your work in future, and when i get the time i will make more comments on your other poems. Thanx again kiki for your kind, encouraging words. Oh by the way what was that line you wrote in Spanish(?)