Hi, Colin. [:

My, has it been awhile! If I didn't know any better I'd say you were just keeping everyone on the edge of their seat waiting for your next masterpiece. :P I absolutely loved this piece. The bridge... well, I can most definitely relate with it. Thank you for your comment... it brought a smile to my face. I do hope you continue with your writing! I, too, have felt the aggravation of being a silent poet. So much to say, but our words can never convey what we wish to release. I feel that right at this moment, but I'm gonna give it another try. [: I hope you do, as well!

Take care!
~Grace

This is very good. good use of words. i really like it.good job. oh and thanks for commenting on my poem!

Chelsea