Good poem, wonderfully written, I like your rhyming =D Gooood job!! Keep it up.

Great great great! Sorry I havent commented in a long time....lol i havent been on in a while. Great job!!

I like the rhymes, I thought they were funny and creative. I'm like that too, I always want to know if I do something wrong so I can learn from it. I always need to apologize. Good stuff, your poetry is so realistic. Written based on everyday situations. It seems you write for others, as well as yourself. Good stuff.