I like it alot...
more power would add to it next time though..
keep it up

Brandi Dumencic

I love this poem it is exactly how i feel. keep it up!!

Great write! I can relate.It held alot of emotions! And that makes it a great poem! Keep up the gr8t work! -cheers- ^_^

Excellent poem. So much emotion I could really relate to it...definitly 5/5

WUT IT D0 I FEEL WUT U SAYIN GAVE U A 5
~RAYRAY~