by katie! May 9, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
He sits on the corner with a bottle of beer |
by Brisa
AWESOME!1 this poem is sad. i hate to know that sometimes people do turn out that way. alone and left to die. well good poem.xoxo |
Sorry, forgot to add that I thought it was good. How rude of me! |
I don't really get the "He died like an alcoholic" line. I'd already assumed by this point that he WAS an alcoholic at this stage. No? |
by Sammib
Sad what alcohol can do to ppl hey?? Sad what trauma can do to ppl. Love what you have done here. Speaks volumes and incorporates alot of realistic issues. Very nicely done. |
Aww this is so sad! Nicely written though! |