GOSH!!!!! your poem absolutely ROX!!!!!!
I loved the last stanza the most!
its so wonderfully written..so much emotions inside!
you're such a wonderful gift..for the one that you love =)
Keep up the excellent work
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

OMG...thas so beautiful...so amazing...i love this poem..its so emotional...great
5/5 ;)

Wonderful job Michelle, most romantic and beautiful penn!!!

Aw this poem is so sweet! I loved every single bit of it! The flow & rhythm of it really held up well & it really shows strong emotions of love. Great job on this!

This poem showed good emotion. I could envision the mood and the way you descibed your words in my mind. You have a great talent, and you should keep writing.
Also, if you have time, please comment on my poems, anyone's you feel like. I would also like to have the comments, votes, and criticism of greats poets like you. So if you have a spare moment, please check them out. Thanx
But in the mean time, please keep writing, you have a gift.

Frank

Hell0 luv that was s0 beautiful a very t0uching piece beutifully w0rded a great ch0ice 0f w0rds. very well written. h0pe u been g0od. keep up the great w0rk!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This poem is by far one of the best, you have a great talent, not many people are able to put feelings into words the way you have, keep it up and don't let anybody stop you. ...:::10/10:::...

Razors_edge

p.s please check out some of my poems it will mean alot.

Hey there.....it seems i hv read this one before somewhere... :o))
as i told u...this one is really beautiful and now other great personalities has proven me right too...so keep on trusting me.
this poem is so much full of love and hope spl this stanza: -

We delighted in the joy and we tasted the pain
We had many days of sunshine and a few drizzles of rain
We rise and fall but through it all
My love for you will still remain

overall this is really a fantastic poem...just loved it.

all the best and take care
5/5

Pure brilliance. I almost teared up, the emotions just felt so familiar. Love every word..
5/5
*Gem*

This poem is great! i love it! your a really good writer
-->((Kels))

Beautiful epressive emotions penned, marvellous, have a good day, take care.

This is exaclty the way I feel right now!!!! It's like you read my mind. This is so so incredible! Too incredible!! OMG!!! Perfect!!!!!!!! I love it!!

Good one

Your poems are so great. I enjoy reading everyone of them. Thanks for the comment. yeh it's been a while, since i've been here. nice to be back though. great to be reading your poems again too =p. Hope you were doing well.
bye. Michelle

Princess after wiriting this beautiful piece i can't say but you are the queen of words. keep writing and dazzling us with your words.
love

It's the perfect piece of undying love- it's amazing!

Michelle,
Wow this is a absolutely beautiful poem I love it. It really touched me too. A perfect piece if you ask me. It carried the beauty of how love really is, wether its easy or hard.
But of course a 5/5.
Thankyou for your comments
god bless
Renee

Wow...your pretty much my idol! ur poem is like my life story about this one guy i pretty much loved last year but i never wanted to tell him because i didnt wanna ruin our friendship but ne way your poem was AMAZING and i hope one day i can write a poem as well as you have!!
Keep up the amazing work,
BizBiz

Wow. This is really powerful! I love it! great job!!!
Keep it up! 5/5

Wow this is a masterpiece no wonder it got so many visits