by Meggie33 May 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You were there first, before him and him, |
by N J Thornton
I think this is very different, at first I didn't know what you meant by being here first, but as the poem went on it became clear. Good poem! |
by Fallen~Tears
Wow.. i think this should be way higher than it is the flow was great and so was the rhyme scheme great work.. i hate stupid down voters 5/5 |
by gemowski
This is a fab piece hun really good work, an ive felt like this before now. |
by p4y5c0
Wow that is a very good poem.. keep it up! |