Wow that is a very good poem.. keep it up!

This is a fab piece hun really good work, an ive felt like this before now.

keep up the good mate.

gemowa (gemma) 20 in cheshire

Wow.. i think this should be way higher than it is the flow was great and so was the rhyme scheme great work.. i hate stupid down voters 5/5

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I think this is very different, at first I didn't know what you meant by being here first, but as the poem went on it became clear. Good poem!