Comments : Your Friends

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. dont worry hun! it'll all start looking up soon.. excellent poem, i could really feel your hurt! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    One rule I stick by is to meet his friends before I even get involved, and even see how he acts with them alone. If he's an idiot he always will be, and will eventually he'll be an idiot with you, so it's not worth it.
    Anyway your poem...It did well to tell the story of how he can treat you wrong and change around his friends.
    You have a couple of spelling mistakes if you don't mind me saying.
    On the line "Your friends make you change, your frineds make you act wrong," you have a typo with friends.
    Also respectful has just the one l.
    Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    0MG! i CAN T0TALLY RELATE T0 THiS RiGHT N0W! i L0VE iT! GREAT J0B SWEETiE!

    *GiRL iN L0VE