Insane Vices

by David R Merry   May 9, 2006


Incarcerated in conference of souls!
That troubled mind shares, body blows!
Though one torso seen, on board many more!
Carousel around, minds revolving door!

A lapse in time, a space reserved.
Unimportant moment, captured, and stored!
I thought i crossed your mind just then?
A story quill, a feathered pen!

They shall not unpearch Thee!
Though try! but try, their might!
Reject the bedraggled entity!
Who`s only power is fright!

Let your milk not turn to liqueur!
Find that green place, Heaven on Earth!
Transparent dimensions we may conquer?
Let the milk, quench our thirst!

Copyright ©2006 David R Merry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Another great one David, its really nice to get refreshing views of things insane..lol. Thanx, Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great piece of writing! the rhyme is rather unusual and the flow is great through the poem.

    thank you very much for your comments on my work.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by David R Merry

    Thanks "Grace" its really useful getting feedback on my writing!

    All the best
    Dave.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Unusual. The word choice was especially cool. Very interesting content. The flow...strong yet not overbearing. Hmm...not exactly a favorite but very interesting write.
    ~Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by David R Merry

    Thanks Lisa! ..... Dave.

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