Our loss

by Shriya   May 9, 2006


My loss is nothing
compared to ur's
just don't start butting in
between our loss

it is not the exams
we have not failed
we passed our exams
but we have sailed away

it is not because we lost a toy
or lost a doy soap
we have not had a fight
neither have we broken up

it is just our loss not other's
not in school not at home
but mine and a dog's
but we have lost something valuable

our head dog died
the eldest

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    I love this poem very creative writing! im sorry for your loss and i hope that you make it though sad days ( NAD HAPPY) xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Morgan

    Hey this one is very good. You are a very creative writer.

  • Hey,

    I like em all!!! : ) THey are good!! : )