Comments : I need help!

  • 18 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Yo- great poem. Like seriously It sounds like the stuff I write check but I think this part "
    Answer the questions, that are in need of answering. Answer why does it have to be me?
    Help me survive in this lost world of mine, if i don't get help soon I'm going to die!"

    could be spaced more like

    Answer the questions,
    that are in need of answering.
    Answer why does it have to be me?
    Help me survive
    in this lost world of mine,
    if i don't get help soon
    I'm going to die!

    Just a thought

    Peace Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Great Poem! This Is Xbr0k3ndr3amzzx I Just Changed My Display Name. Ya We Can Be Friends If You'd Like Im Always Here For Anyone If Anyone Needs Me So Of Course Your Welcome As Well... But Anyways Great Poem And I Loved The Emotion Your A Great Writer Keep It Up :D You Can Email Me At Xodecembershhox@yahoo.com, I Also Got Hotmail Too XTheseTearsFallDownLikeRainX@hotmail.com And Aim Xbr0k3ndr3amzzx You Can Always Contact Me :D
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Great poem! Two thumbs, good job.