Awwww...its kinda sad..but its really good,shows what you were feeling at the time

Why I done this (I think done should be did.)

It was filled with emotion, you seem like you write from your heart. I love this one. Great job!

Your very good at expressing your feelings in writing.

Suicide is cowardice-i tell myself this every day so now i'm telling you

About the poem-packed with a emotion
V.good

Sondos

That was amazing, once again though, (this is the 2nd one) i didnt see it coming that it was going to be about your dad, it was a very good poem, it had extreme meaning. Too somebody with a very hateful relationship with their parents, a poem like that could be very touching. You aren't alone, lots of people go through sh*t, just try to stick in there... u know i luv ya! haha... good job!
**meggie**