Understand

by Jennifer   May 9, 2006


You cant trust me
I understand completely
I cant even trust myself
I really need help
I keep my pain all inside
Maybe thats why I cry
But no-one will understand
I know they can't
It's sad
You probably don't think my life's been bad
But were you always there dad
I was always afraid
To take
All those pills
But it was an escape
From being raped
And then the weed, pills, sex....
I thought it was the best
Then it hit me
I was only escaping
The pain
Of what I was doing
Then I tried
To fight
My pain
I was going insane
I was cutting myself
but hell......
I understand you
Because of all the sh*t that I do
You don't trust me
I understand completely

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  • 18 years ago

    by erica

    Hey! i havent been on this site in forever, but u left me a cmment a lng time ago and i just wanted to say thanx!! it means alot...

    && btw this is rly good.... i hate my dad...

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love this poem. It's descriptive yet very sad. The flow and everything that I like in a good poem was there. Keep up the good work Hun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I like this you've definitely made the effort to portray a deep emotion just perfect your rhyme scheme and it would be perfect

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Lovely structure this poem...flowed like a stream of thoughts...it jumped about and had a varied pace...and the content in itself was very very sad. I like the irony in the last line, I got the impression in the midst of it all there was anything but comprehension...which made it even sadder.

    Super poem.

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Haunting poem. More of a narrative but the emotions were there and I can sense some confusion but that might just be me.

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