Gud poem man,

The cheating line effected me man, i did the same to my girl

Keep up da magic man

Dang this is way better then any of mine.
But yet im only 12.
And i just started writing poems.
And most of my poems are about my ex bf.
lol.
But this is GREAT! [:

Dang this is way better then any of mine.
But yet im only 12.
And i just started writing poems.
And most of my poems are about my ex bf.
lol.
But this is GREAT! [:

That was a sick ass poem! i'd give it a 10.

I love this one the most

I love the honesty in this,and sometimes the fact that a person can forgive us is a sign that they love us,but shouldn't we give them respect if we love them?? I have one suggestion,try putting your poems in stanzas. 4 lines then a space and so on. It just helps it read easier.You have that ability to speak from the heart,the true mark of a poet!