Awww.. that was so good.. and so cute! i reallly loved it hun! keep up the wonderful work! 5/5

This is a very sweet poem, i't was a pleasure to read! thanx for sharing 5/5

Aw. =) it's cute. it's a little short, but it's still really cute lol, and i have friends i think of as sisters and that's always a good feeling. I liked it. good job.

Morgan --
Grammar, grammar, grammar. Something you must not know much about. You REALLY have to work on the grammar in here ;; the exclaimation points don`t work at all, because your poem doesn`t hold the emotion to add them. Most poems don`t. You`ve got spelling mistakes in there, and the flow doesn`t work well either. The rhyming wasn`t bad. I guess I was generous about giving you a 4/5. You can definitely improve this ;; I know you can.
Its been nice reading your work. Take my advice into consideration, and you`ll do a lot better. I promise.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I liked it
5/5