The Statue Crumbles

by Josh   May 9, 2006


He is not safe.
He is unsure.
Tried looking ahead,
His vision is blurred.

Such a fearful place,
To be trapped all alone.
Tried looking behind,
Only dust and bones.

Once so proud
Now simply humble.
Staring in awe
as the statue crumbles

All confidence is gone.
And none of it mattered
Where once there was love
The image is shattered.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is really good. I loved it. You did such a great job on this. The imagery in this was really good and It really kept my attention. Great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Great poem!! I agree with fallen those were very good lines it brought alot of effect to the poem!! 5/5!!! You did a fantastic job! Rhyming and flow was good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Thats a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Interesting...."as the statue crumbles" That was a cool line...Very interesting for words. Imagery nice as is the flow.
    "Tried looking behind,
    Only dust and bones."
    That's a great part as well. Overall nice job.
    ~Fallen

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