Comments : The Statue Crumbles

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Interesting...."as the statue crumbles" That was a cool line...Very interesting for words. Imagery nice as is the flow.
    "Tried looking behind,
    Only dust and bones."
    That's a great part as well. Overall nice job.
    ~Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Thats a good poem

  • Great poem!! I agree with fallen those were very good lines it brought alot of effect to the poem!! 5/5!!! You did a fantastic job! Rhyming and flow was good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is really good. I loved it. You did such a great job on this. The imagery in this was really good and It really kept my attention. Great job on this!