Interesting...."as the statue crumbles" That was a cool line...Very interesting for words. Imagery nice as is the flow. |
by AnJolina
Thats a good poem |
Great poem!! I agree with fallen those were very good lines it brought alot of effect to the poem!! 5/5!!! You did a fantastic job! Rhyming and flow was good!! |
by Bridgette
Wow that is really good. I loved it. You did such a great job on this. The imagery in this was really good and It really kept my attention. Great job on this! |