That created a great imagery. Nice job kiddo. Great flow as well.

-Jennifer..

Overall Rating: 4/5

Awesome poem Simon! I really love the imagery!.. Very nice ending as well. It really has a calm and relaxing touch to it.

I feel like I'm drifting away on that tide. This is so lovely, Simon! Excellent write!

This i really like. you can completely imagine it; great choice of words. its awesome. i love the water and this is perfect. nice job!

Wow great poem dude you have a good imaginary talent love the poem

5/5 GREAT POEM... HERE ANOTHER AMAZING POEM BY YOU.... THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US.

Beautiful!!! Very romantic, with such a nice flow and perfect imagery ^_^ A wonderful write!

That was beautiful...I was just randomly browsing to comment on someones poem and I found yours...Great job, it was great!!

THERE IS BEAUTY OF WORDS. IT IS POETRY STYLE.IT IS SHOT & SWEET.

Very nice poem! I love how you captured the moment by saying that the sky was scarlet. Absolutely brilliant! I love this piece.
Keep it up! Take care and God bless,
Sarah-Joy

Excellent poem. You write about nature with a fantastic touch.
Nate

Loved it...
it's wonderful...

i'm portuguese...=)

*isabel*