I couldn't Ask for more

by PS   May 9, 2006


I needed your love
those caressing words
those enveloping hugs and
passionate kisses but
i couldn't ask for more

you helped me with my unhappy life
my failing schoolwork and hating friends
whenever i was alone, lonely in my room
you came to me, to talk me through it
you made sure that i wasn't afraid in my loneliness
and so they kept away from me,
because you spoke for me,
you were always there and
i couldn't ask for more

seeing you made my heart jump
whenever you came to see me
i wished it was as a lover
but you came with her, your darling
and even though i ached for your touch
and inside i was crying
for the fearing of losing you but
i couldn't ask for more

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That is really sad and I can definintely relate to it. I loved everything in this poem. You described everything well and did a great job on it. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... What a wonderful write. I'm a bit lost for words in this one, a truly outstanding piece Poonam!