Comments : As Sharp As a Pencil

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Her last tear was fatal~

    Its a good poem and all :D, but at times it didn't really kinda make sense just try working on the flow alittle bit and it will beperfect:D great job
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    mia

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Chambers

    WEEEEEEEEEE