Awwww! that is so sweet!! I really liked the rhythm and the flow of it. you have a great way with words, and I can really relate to this poem!

Yuo are Commited. That is a + in life. Commitment starts in the heart. But only in a strong Heart. And you have that heart. keep up the good work. Your friend-Aaron

Aww rachel u have the greatest guy in the earth and he loves u soooo much i can tell by looking at him...great poem and i know that u 2 will be together forever!!!