by Fallen Angel
"The air is thick with the lies you spoke |
I love the beat and the word choice. This poem is amazing. keep it up. |
by LiL K
Wow, this is a really deep poem truly written from the heart. I love how you write two couplets and then an ABAB stanza...that was unique. |
"Each lie was slowly given its own life |
Great poem...it gives some good imagery...its almost like my most recent...this poem might be among your top 5...i like the changing of rhyming patterns...and the rhyming for that fact |
by Nee
I love this poem, its very sad and heartfelt! |