It Was Beautiful In The Most Simplistic Way, Full Of Great Metaphors That Speak So Much Truth That Its Heart Renching And Hits You Where Home Is *Smooches* I Miss Being Able To Read Good Poetry Like This From You, I'm Your Biggest Fan!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

For a short piece. I thought it was really good. I really liked the last stanza. Great job! 5/5

`taleee xx

Me like. It's short and simple but so perfect. And you're right. It does have a great message. Awesome job!

Short and simple, but very powerfully written with some effective descriptions. the rhymes are simple and well formed and the structure implimented well. overall a fantastic peipe of writting.

5/5

A nice peace of work, it might be short but pust's so much out. The rythem of ur poem was perfect, liked your use of words. comment on mine some time although there not as good as your. keep up the great work hope to read more. 5/5

Janet

Hey that was so good!!! i'm embressed- oh and thanks for commenting on my poem if you wanna talk email me or add me on msn tomuchtohandle@hotmail.com

Awwww.. i LOVED that! it was so adorablle.. and your right, such a great message.. this was definetely a 5/5! i really enjoyed reading that.. it made me smile! nice write!

Yes! I liked this one alot. Very short and basic. But you were right, it has a great message to it. I really liked the first two lines. They stood out alot to me. Keep it up =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I really liked this poem. If only, people were happy enough with what they had and who they are. Good message.

Well, short or not..i loved it, it did have a great message...I will try to use it to help myself!!! great job

Wow this poem does have a great mess. i really liked it

If only we could change the world,
And put its pieces back together.
i liked that part the most.
i wish i could change the world to make it better