by LiL K May 9, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I had to write this for an assignment and it only took me about 30 minutes because I waited too long to get started, but I figured I'd put it on the site anyway! |
Wow kelly that was good...we need to start writing on here agagin like we used too...u know on my poem that has over 250 comments...and they are all of me u jaimie and bonnie....ahh the good old days...well hit me up later love you...and where were u today? |
by Alissa
AWESOME, AWESOME,AWESOME!!!!! That was so amazingly awesome!!! Soo CREEPY! Man, that was soo awesome, I have shivers!!!! Awesome awesome AWESOME!!! |
by Bridgette
Wow this is a really good poem.. it is very descriptive, dark, deep.. the rhythm and flow of it was perfect and you did an amazing job on this! I loved it from beginning to end! |
That was way cool. Definitely better than a similar one I wrote called 'One Night Alone' I think. But this had great flow and great images. Cool write. Really cool content and just an overall interesting piece that kept the reader hooked throughout. |
by Ashlee
Omg.. i love the way u wrote it.. i feel like i was there !!! verrryyy good!!!! :) |