Not mine anymore

by Ashlee   May 9, 2006


The boy that was mine
the guy who is always on my mind,
the one i use to run too
the one i use to hang on too
now i look and hes not with me!
i don\'t want to be selfish
but i want him all for myself
is that so wrong of me?
the boy that once was mine has another love
as i ponder on what we had
i see now what I'm missing..
the one i use to run too,
the one i use to hang on too
isnt mine anymore!!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by leeann

    It rawks! i can deff think of someone when readin that.

    lee

  • 18 years ago

    by Mairuny

    Hey thanx 4 commenting my poem and now im doing the same to urs! I like this poem alot and i see that you've been threw alot. I wanted to know if we can be friends? well i hope you say yes and w/b!

  • 18 years ago

    by LiL K

    Thanks for your comment on my poem. I really like this one, I can relate. My only question is about the last line cause it doesn't really make sense to me. I was thinkin it was supposed to be "isn't mine anymore" or somethin like that.

    anyway, it was a great poem none the less, keep up the good work! 5/5

    -Much Love-
    *~KeLLy~*

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    This is a very cool poem!
    keep going!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow congratulations good job. i know its hard (and i dont even do it myself) but it would be prefect if some of the lines eg"the boy that once was mine has found another love" was a little shorter. like 'yet he found another love' or sumfin like that. thats just what came off teh top of my head. but anyway good job :)
    amy

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