Wow congratulations good job. i know its hard (and i dont even do it myself) but it would be prefect if some of the lines eg"the boy that once was mine has found another love" was a little shorter. like 'yet he found another love' or sumfin like that. thats just what came off teh top of my head. but anyway good job :)
amy

This is a very cool poem!
keep going!

Thanks for your comment on my poem. I really like this one, I can relate. My only question is about the last line cause it doesn't really make sense to me. I was thinkin it was supposed to be "isn't mine anymore" or somethin like that.

anyway, it was a great poem none the less, keep up the good work! 5/5

-Much Love-
*~KeLLy~*

Hey thanx 4 commenting my poem and now im doing the same to urs! I like this poem alot and i see that you've been threw alot. I wanted to know if we can be friends? well i hope you say yes and w/b!

It rawks! i can deff think of someone when readin that.

lee