Well Hun, it seems that you really truly do have strong feeling towards Branden which is a good thing. You are also a very good writer and its great that you can express your feeling through writing don’t ever give that up you have true talent with writing great job dear

I love how you wrote about a real situation. great flow and how it tells a story or experience i guess.. in good detail. keep it up ur a really amazing writer.
dee

Aww! It's so cute! Lol. I LOVE it! Flow was a bit rocky in some parts, but the rhymes were excellently chosen out. I liked most of the words you used too. Great write. =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha