A sad cholo (a mexican gangsta)

by a   May 9, 2006


A sad cholo once cried
"mi su corazon has died (my heart and love)\"
a girl had once left him feeling sad. she no longer loved him so he went mad.

as he stood in the pouring rain,
he could feel the pain.
the pain of a thousand knives
stabing his heart
and he could no longer take it. so he decided to take his own life and love her no more

as the rain hit his face,
he dropped to his knees.
he put his weed to his head
and he put his click up.
he started to cry as he put the gun to his heart.

when we found the body,
he was lying in a puddle of blood
with a tear still rolling down his face.

in his hand lyed a note.
i read the note and took the quote and this is what it said:

i ly here in my own puddle of blood. our love i could not save
so i take it with me to my grave.
i will love her even after i die.
and when she comes and visits me and the angels sing,
i hope she\'ll still love me
and we can spread our wings and fly!

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  • 18 years ago

    by karina

    Aye Que lIndo very triste

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good one...more detail...

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by blood staind wrist

    OMFG this poem is so ...... GREAT it is so sad at the same time i love it! keep it up ~...:::10/10:::...~

    Razors_edge

    P.S please check out some of my poems and quotes it will eman alot. Thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by EMO LOVER

    This is sad come on honey and smile! 5/5 though i think its good

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Wow great choice of words. i love the way you wrote it too. really good.. keep it up