Hi people. This is my poem...be nice cos I'm always nice to yours. But constructive critism is always welcome.

Thats really good i enjoyed readin it..
but you godda hold on ta what you have left..
good luch
much love
n luck
always alana

Thanks for you're advise Alana. Much appreciated.

I like yours too. I have alot of other poems u can read. Feel free to read them, im sure youd like them.

I dunno man I have a band myself and I am already starting to use all my lyrics.. which one did you wanna use?

Kinda souns like one that i would write just from a different view